Pass The Story V1

Walt: Punctuate our work.

Original  Version

Once upon a time a gingerbread man got created. He was cool had chocolate glasses. One they he saw someone trying to steal his glasses. So he ran as fast as he could to get them back. He sadly stopped trying. He took his lollie phone out and called the 0911 and he was running crazy man. He WAS AN animal he is so crazy just like,

1,0000000000000000000 times! He said help! help! help! help help help. And The gingerbread man was running. His leg broke down and he had to use dog poop to make his leg work also he was hungry so ate the dog 

poo to. And he said it was so so so so yummy mhhhh he said. So he started to run again but he needed to go to the toilet but there was no around. So he went toilet and pooped and peed  on the ground in front of all the people. 

They were all looking at him with a weird looking like he was a hippo wearing a dress but they weren't looking at him they were looking at the dog behind him. The dog tried to eat him 

but failed because he ran away and just disappeared. No one ever found him until they did. They found him in the bakery he was scared to death because he hasn’t seen people in 5 years. He was terrified but then he got to know them and he was living  like he was a human. Everyone was so nice to him and he became part of the human world.

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Once upon a time a Gingerbread Man got created. He was cool had chocolate glasses. One day he saw someone trying to steal his glasses. So he ran as fast as he could to get them back. He sadly stopped trying. He took his lollie phone out and called the 0911 and he was running like a crazy gingerbread man. He was an wild animal he was so crazy.

 He said help 1,0000,000 times! He said help! help! help! . The Gingerbread Man was running. His leg broke down and he had to use dog poop to make his leg work also he was hungry so ate the dog poo to. He said it was so so so so yummy “Mhhhh” he said. So he started to run again but he needed to go to the toilet but there was no around. So he went toilet and pooped chocolate and peed coke on the ground in front of all the people. 

They were all looking at him with a weird looking like he was a Hippo wearing a dress but they weren't looking at him they were looking at the dog behind him. The Dog tried to eat him 

but failed because he ran away and just disappeared. No one ever found him until they did. They found him in the bakery he was scared to death because he hasn’t seen people in 5 years. He was terrified but then he got to know them and he was living like he was a human. Everyone was so nice to him and he became part of the human world.

Task Description : We played a game called 'Pass the Story' . We would write a little bit of the story, and then pass then pass it to the person next to us. They would then continue on the story. After the story was finished, we edited it to make sure it was punctuated properly