Year 5/6 Camp - Writing

WALT: write in paragraphs.

Year 5/6 Camp - Writing


WALT: write in paragraphs. Reminder don’t talk Rae Jae, You need a simple sentence a complex and a quality



Introduction


Hook the reader in, and let them know what your writing is going to be about.



Last week me and team four went on camp. I was confused at first because I did not go to camp last year because my trip. Did you ever go to camp?



Paragraph 1


What is camp? Who, When, Where, Why. All the information. What activities did you do? Where do you sleep? How long is the camp etc...



Camp is very fun for everyone. We had lots of helpers, They started camp last week. We camped at Pt England school. I slept at my tent in my sleeping bag. I went because of i told i never went last year. I did Kayaking,Killer zone,Cyclo Ball,Slip and Slide,Concert Night/ Practice,Movie night - Small Foot,Hall Activities:Skateboarding,Scooters,Ramps,Ping pong/ Table tennis,Trampoline/ Flip mat and Jump Jam.


Paragraph 2


Highlight One - What was one of your highlights?


E.g. Activity, Food, Tenting, Pools, Concert



When we went kayaking I got in a double with Kauri. After that, when we were at the green pole at the deep end we nearly fell of. Then we rolled back because Mr Burt said with the loudspeaker.

Paragraph 3

Highlight One - What was one of your highlights?


E.g. Activity, Food, Tenting, Pools, Concert



On friday I went to the pools with team 4. I was very excited. I loved it but the water was really cold.



Paragraph 4


Thank you’s. Who made this happen for you? I.e. Family, School, Parent Helpers, Teachers, and Leaders etc



This is the people the made this happen:Camp Leaders,Mr Somerville, Miss Timmi, Jean, Miss West,Mose,Miss Sio,Miss Tuiā,Miss Parrant.Whaia Pania,Mr J,Mr Burt and more people thanks to all does people I and team four got to go to camp and you got to read this fantasatic recount.



Conclusion


What did you learn about yourself on camp, why would you recommend that every student does this in future.



I learnt that I hate waking up early. Ok that's not the thing I learnt that I love going to camp YOU SHOULD COME IF YOU HAVE A SCHOOL CAMP IT'S A-MAZING get it were in a maze? Wait am I the only one innnn aaaaa MAZE!.







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Last week me and team four went on camp. I was confused at first because I did not go to camp last year because my trip. Did you ever go to camp?







Camp is very fun for everyone. We had lots of helpers, They started camp last week. We camped at Pt England school. I slept at my tent in my sleeping bag. I went because of i told i never went last year. I did Kayaking,Killer zone,Cyclo Ball,Slip and Slide,Concert Night/ Practice,Movie night - Small Foot,Hall Activities:Skateboarding,Scooters,Ramps,Ping pong/ Table tennis,Trampoline/ Flip mat and Jump Jam.


When we went kayaking I got in a double with Kauri. After that, when we were at the green pole at the deep end we nearly fell of. Then we rolled back because Mr Burt said with the loudspeaker.


On Friday I went to the pools with team 4. I was very excited. I loved it but the water was really cold.  There were cool stuff like a fountain and others that I don't know how to explain



This is the people the made this happen:Camp Leaders,Mr Somerville, Miss Timmi, Jean, Miss West,Mose,Miss Sio,Miss Tuiā,Miss Parrant. Whaia Pania,Mr J,Mr Burt and more people thanks to all does people I and team four got to go to camp and you got to read this fantasatic recount.


I learnt that I hate waking up early. Ok that's not the thing I learnt that I love going to camp YOU SHOULD COME IF YOU HAVE A SCHOOL CAMP IT'S A-MAZING get it were in a maze? Wait am I the only one innnn aaaaa MAZE!. Fine out after this ad break wait you're reading not watch Ammm BYE!

Task Description:This is camp I loved it if you have a school camp or a camp make sure you go there you might learn somethings a lot of thing or anything go if you can go!