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Showing posts with label 2017 writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2017 writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 25 October 2017

Sprint Track Recount



In the morning at school we line up in a straight line.We was doing sprints . The girls went first then the boys . Madi came first in the girls . Devante came first in the boys and in the second race John came first.I was race in the second one and came 3-5 I feel nervous a the start.I wait for Mr Moran to smash the clap thinning. A while later we did the tops they were 10 people .suddenly they had to race another way they race in a crab way.Mr Moran race too and and Mr Moran came first John didn't beat Mr Moran but Siaku said that John Actually won. Then we went back to class.

Friday, 22 September 2017

Beach Mission

Beach Mission

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This afternoon I was at the beach I was just having a holiday at the USA I was getting sunburn so my mum put up the umbrella so I will not get sunburn then I ran to the ocean with my friend SIAKU and swim.

sudeley I saw a ship on fire and it was stranded to Siaku and me asks people and so someone gave a speed boat and me and siaku heard 300 people screaming and siaku found a speak but it had no energy toxic smoke filling 300 people lung we save 267 because some people help but people did die because they jump of the ship then the other people swim home and siaku and me went on the speed boat and buy ice block and just sat under the umbrella.                      

Friday, 8 September 2017

My Rocket adventure


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My Rocket ship look’s like a speed rocket ship. My rocket ship special power is Speed .It will go to space on Friday or Thursday. Thrusters is Green colour and work’s very very good.The captain Is Rae Jae. The top part Is Red. I love it and Siaku my best friend.

My Rocket boarding is when I press a blue button stairs come down and my launched is very strong the thruster strong to.  Smoke came down and water spray’s it and after that BAM! The thruster is going fire goes on and when go’s up smoke spreads out. The people cheered and whirled. THEY NAME IT GUARDIANS OF THE GALAXY . When the other rocket’s exploded….  YEA!!! Let's go rockets rockets rockets.


First I went to the sky a while later I was in space.They were rock’s and stuff.I sawed a solar system it was blue It had ring It’s neptune I think? Well at least were IN SPACE!!!!! Finally my dream come true going to space. SUN, MERCURY,EARTH,The moon,MARS,JUPITER,SATURN,URANUS,NEPTUNE .Loving neptune Super cold .There were crater’s neptune is freeze’s The End.





Monday, 21 August 2017

Phases of the Moon Dictation

The amount of the moon that you see from the Earth depends on hell much of it is light up by the sun.This amount changes Each day.The phases of the moon depends on it position in relation to the sun and Earth . As the moon makes it’s way around the Earth we see  the bright of the moon surface at different angles this is call phases of the moon it takes 29 days for the moon to orbit the Earth.

Monday, 3 July 2017

Rae Jae - Dictation - Kitesurfing

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Soaring through the sky I feel like superman crashing through the waves I feel like a dolphin. This experience is a  feeling you only get every so often. Hopping over the waves butterflies filling my tummy and twirling through the air.I show the supporters or the trick’s I am able to do. I can hear cheering and screaming from all my supporters. The hardest part was going kitesurfing is packing up.Having to pull the kite in on a windy the is hard work kitesurfing is sunh incredible sport.   

Rae Jae - Dictation - The Walkway

Looking out at the clear glistening blue water.I see a walkway. Suddenly I stop . I think to myself. Would this be a good idea . before giving myself a chance to answer.I find myself jumping onto slippery log.I skip from log to log.Splash slipping of the land.Head first into the ice cold water.With all my strength.I swim across the water back to the beach What an adventure...

Matariki Script

One scary night in lake Taupo the sea was black. There was waves and the wind was blowing very hard.  There was a bad sea monster call Taniwha and wanted to eat this boy.  Tamarereti was hungry. So Tamarereti went fishing.He caught 2 little fish and 1 big one but suddenly he got loess.Tamarereti beach.On to the beach.Tamarereti ate his fish that he caught on the boat and out of his corner off his eye.He saw shining pebbles.Tamarereti throw shiny pebbles in the boat. So he throw it in the sky so he could find his way back home.The people in the world called Tamarereti the story of Tamarereti.there all was star’s in the sky.The End.    

Friday, 30 June 2017

Frosty and the BMX kid.


Jumping Into the ocean.A brave boy jumped and did a giant bomb.He sup cosu.

Under the blue sky a funny god was talking to the boy they were talking about ice cream and bombing.They talked about bombs and more bombs and heb’s.God and the boy love talking about bombs and ice cream.      

Surprisingly the god did a bomb! Then flip’s after he did a bomb then he, jump back up. God’s fountain of spray was amazing. God likes the rocky cliff he watched the rocky cliff and the mountain’s.After they did bomb’s they ate ice cream.With 100 and 1000 with chocolate and the lasts thing was cherry on the top.The boy when like this YEAH! I LOVE 100 AND 1000 WITH CHOCOLATE AND CHERRY IN THE TOP!!!  The god was like this ha ha ha ha ha haa hhhhhaaaaaaaa!!! Then he was like this all right let’s go get you a 100 AND 1000 WITH CHOCOLATE AND CHERRY IN THE TOP.Bye.

Thursday, 1 June 2017

Haunted House-Pick a Path

As I walk up to the Haunted House I saw graves, I sneaked around to the back of the house.  The window is cracked but the window was too small, so I kept searching for the door. Through a cobweb filled alley, I see a door, it’s open I walk inside, I hear a baby crying.  I search the house for the baby.  I walk into find a radio on the bench, through the speaker I hear “you’re not leaving here now”.  I run for the front door.  The door is locked shut there is no way out…
I got a bomb and exploded the door. It Just made it a little bit soft.I got a hammer from the cover and BAM! I bam the door again BAM! Then I got a shotgun and Shot the door and BAM! I shot the door.The door went BBBAAAMMM!!! It didn't open.I saw a window I smash It.The mysterious broken window and skeleton bones on the floor was spooky.I heard spooky sound.BOW! I hear the door shut and BAM! I can get out now I SAW ARE SPOOKY GRAVEYARD!!! I WAS SCARED.I tipped toe down stairs.I saw a mysterious diamond car.I was like this wwwwwhhhhaaaaattttttttt Wow! But I don’t have a driver card.So I try to drive the diamond car.I DID IT YES! YES! YES!!! OH YEAH!!!.Let’s Go! BBBAAAMMM!!!! This diamond car is fast It teleported me to Glen innes.The End.

Monday, 29 May 2017

Dictation-Haunted house


In the distance I see dimmed lights and a old house.There is a old bridge leading to the house.It is a old bridge.It has be There for hundreds of years.Watching every step that I took.I slowly found my way across the bridge. Creeeek I can hear the noise of the door the opening and the rocking chair rocking like no one is sitting on it.I slowly open the door and aaaaaaaaaaa to be continued…          

Wednesday, 24 May 2017

The Taniwha

Start your writing here: Went I was walking up a hill I saw four people running. Because there was a fierce creature.It had long pointy tail.It had sharp long teeth too. The four people took a photo.I did not no the fierce creature name.That's y I call it a fierce creature.I asked the 4 people what's the fierce creature name.It's a taniwha The taniwha said RRRRRRRRRRRRRRR AAAAAAAAAAA!!!! I was frightened.I ran too!.The taniwha was red.But it was a nice taniwha. Someone throw a sword in his leg.that's y he said RRRRRRRRRRR AAAAAAAA!!!!!!! So we help him get the sword out.The End.

Tuesday, 11 April 2017

Creek Trip


This morning room 12 and room 13 went to the creek. we saw grass and leaves. And a pipls. There was ducks birds and pukeko.Then we saw tree and saw a farm and in there was horse and cow.