Draft 1

Six years ago,my cousin force me to ride a small bike that was really scary.Because I was a small little boy and my cousin was 6 or 7.I was glad my dad was there because my cousin pushed me of a ramp.I was controlling the bike with me little hands lucky someone was down there and stop the little bike.I was so relief after the good innocent stranger cont me . It was the most firtgtingest day of my life.

Recount

Two weeks, and four days ago, It was the last they of Pt England School and muffty . I was really excited thats was the reason i forgot about muffty. I loved the fact that we only had to do Art to play coding. We had to use sharpes to do the outlines. At morning tea I was playing with my friends Mohammed,Siakupega,Valeil,Viliami,Kauri,Bradley,


Simon and Lealofi.

Two of the year eights Did the Karakia and the Mihi .

We prayed to god to have a good holiday.

I been waiting for one month I think.

Kauri help me