Write like Paul

WALT: write using the structure of a narrative.

It Begins

In the year 3177, the end of the world began. Giant Earth,Massive waves and the most terrifying creatures “Stawmerrys” ( totally not made up) yes you heard me right Stawmerrys. Creatures that are very terrifying.





People were screaming “AHHHHHH” “RUN” he didn’t know what to do I was only a 1009 year old and in the year 3177 people could live up to 1M years. he


was hiding with my family and friends with there own family to in the bunker.



He always got bored. The government sended sweet bombs but it didn’t work. So they could only do one thing ‘EAT THE STAWMERRYS!’ ‘NOW MAKE A ROBOT A GIANT ONE’ He said in strip and scaring voice” So he built a giant robot to eat the Stawmerrys .



‘wait the earth its breaking now put the so much glue in it will stink’ said the government. ‘Wow never thought it would stink’ ‘I’d like to help but i’m helping other planets sorry. ‘ Did I survive DID I REALLY SURVIVE THAT WOW!’ ‘what is that IS THAT SOME SORT OF A BOSS!?’

Is it a strawberry or a stawmerry 

The government says ‘we need help from other governments’ ‘Ok’ said Sir Rae Jae,.


So Sir Rae Jae called “Great Bradley, Super Kauri and Mr Siaku and he needed a agent so he called “agent Mohammed” ‘ok now let's go and eat them’ .

‘OH NO ITS SO BIG’ and so they all had to give the Stawmerrys fruits and vegetables. ‘Wait’ this super smart guy called Rae Jae said.

‘I'LL JUST secretly paint this meat in to a sort of new fruit’ Said Rae Jae. Then he told the government's . And if I didn’t tell you they became slaves now onto the story. Now I sal tell you.


“They glue the earth back to normal and ate'em strawberries. They ate and ate but they were full. So the people that were hungry which were 3M people ate them. They ate and ate till there was one more left but it was There boss .

‘The robot eat it!’ said Sir Rae Jae. They ate it and they were back to normal fixed.