The Mission recount

WALT: Structure a recount correctly




Today at school, our crazy teacher treated us like we were in the army. Who also has a crazy teacher like us? . So he told us to go outside, So we went out side. after that when we were all outside, He took a deep breath and said something very loud, but I forgot.



He told us to march we were beside the pav he told us how treible we did. Some people were stomping their feet ‘BOOM BAM!” I did not know what my super crazy teacher was gonna do next can you guess?.



Then We tried to sneak past very quiet . We kinda did well!. We were trying our best well I though . We walked along the deck and it was hilarious!. People were talking like this “SIR YOU GOOD” I heard some say. . We were very curious to see what our mad man was gonna do next. At this point I was dying to see what would happen next.


The third and final thing we had to do a fitness test we had to do push-ups,sit-ups and we had to pretend to be on a plane balancing. But he tried to push a boy name “Austin” but he had good balance .I thought we were gonna runon the bike tracks. But we didn’t run around anything.




Finally we march back to class but Moui was very cringing he yelled out “SIR I'M THE CAPTAIN!” or something like that. But we marched back to class and he told us if we did not make the elite team we get brain washed and back to boring PES students again. So no one made it on the team we were back to class he said “wow it was like we went somewhere but i don’t think we did. WE did all that to make a recount yep I told you were crazy . So now you did not read this writing I brainwash you did not read this you did not go on Rae Jae’s blog. Overall this was very weird hope some day your teacher act’s like this to.

Wait, were we getting recording?!. But I saved the banana he told me to eat him so I did.😌




Task Description: This task,I'm proud of. I focused really hard for this I went backed and fixed some stuff. I'm proud! of myself! yes I realy did iT!. So this why my friend writes so much he focus maybe if you focus you can write a whole book!.