Task Description:Hello this is my summer learning jourery task for day 4. This the stuff i would do if I for principal for one day. So I hope you enjoyed looking at this and say 'yeah I should get an underground spa\pool. Dont worry it only costs 838T dollars so yeah go buy it for me hurry up!
Good Evening Rae Jae,
ReplyDeleteI am Samuel, a Year 7 student attending Sacred Heart College. I am part of a trial period in which they are trying out students to be blog commenters, which means it is my first experience with this sort of position. However, I did complete the Summer Learning Journey as a student in previous years.
I love the humorous ideas that you have come up with if you were principal for 1 week. I would probably put air conditioning in my office too if I were a principal. I love the idea of leisure time, either to cool down after a long day, or have fun with your friends until it is time to get picked up.
I like the ideas, however, maybe it is a good idea to read through your writing to make sure that the correct spelling is adhered to. The same can be said for your punctuation and grammar. It can be a pain to do this but the more you incorporate it into your writing, it will become second nature, if you will.
The presentation is good, however, don't forget to attribute the images you use in your blog posts. Attributing images is when you acknowledge the source or where you found it from. This is very important and you might be required to hand in a sheet of paper showing the attribution in college and university assessments. Apart from that, this is very good. Well done Rae Jae.
Kind Regards,
Samuel
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